- Children who are brought up in a home where parents always vote are more likely to vote than kids whose parents do not.
- People are more likely to vote if their parents or head of household voted.
- Residents of death row often spend their lives in there for crimes genetic testing has proved they have not committed.
- Yale is hard to get into, yet Harvard is harder.
- Despite not appearing to be prejudiced in other ways, admissions officers are more likely to admit students who look like the rest of the student body.
- If I don’t show up for an appointment, my parole officer suspects me of doing something that violates the terms of my parole. [Can you revise to make the parole officer the subject AND eliminate the unnecessary if/then by creating a category of parolee?]
- In less than a year the savings in gas will make up for the higher cost of the car.
- Children who were abused are more likely to abuse their own children. [Just one thing here, and it’s hard to avoid, is that you have children having children.]
- Cars that can switch from gas to electiric when conditions permit saves [save money because cars is plural] money with better mileage.
- Drivers shopping for a new car have to decide between hybrids or conventional engines. [They don’t have to be drivers. What’s the simple category of people who shop for cars?]
- There is no reason to dislike driving a car that can switch from gasoline to electricity when conditions permit.
Beautiful work overall.
Beautiful work overall with exceptions noted.
Hey, DogLover, I have produced a page of Models and Solutions for this exercise under the Models menu at the top of the blog.