Robust Verbs-Lg10215

Vancouver gained a huge problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. Due to the number of addicts, the crime rate has soured. We see form this that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. They will exceed all limits in order to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin, and is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. The hospitals should no longer have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

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1 Response to Robust Verbs-Lg10215

  1. davidbdale says:

    Roughly the same length as the original and often as wordy. Admirable are the rephrasings that make the text more accessible and the inclusion of some robust verbs.

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