Robust Verbs-hershey

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

In the state of Vancouver, a program called the ” free heroin for addicts ” has put it’s foot down in stopping the increasing crime rates of heroin addicts. Addicts of this terrible drug are great affected by the use of this drug. The effect of the interruption of their day to day lives. This drug has interfered with the daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships. Due to the addicting chemicals in this drug, creates the user to do anything for the use. This then results in the crime of trying to retrieve this drug by stealing or breaking and entering. The introduction of this program is to help users safely get the drug but it will not help ween these users off it. The goal of decreasing the crime rates in which users take in getting the drug may be successful but it can also increase the amount of users. The use of this program will also decrease the rate of users who end up being medically attained. Being able to help hospitals from having to deal with users w

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1 Response to Robust Verbs-hershey

  1. davidbdale says:

    Admirable in its attempt to make the paragraph sound more vital and alive, the sentences are deeply flawed. So, credit for effort and ambition, but not for performance.


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