Obviously this is not ready for your portfolio, Tokens, and considering the progress you’ve made since your Draft version, you aren’t making much progress toward that finished product.
You’re not obligated to request feedback, but building a Portfolio without it is dangerous. In two weeks, I’ll shut down feedback for this assignment. If you haven’t received any, you won’t get any, and it will be difficult to argue (as you must) that you engaged in and benefited from the “recursive” process of writing and rewriting through the social aspect of writing for a community.
I care about your success, but not more than you do. I won’t pull and I won’t push, but I will give you a boost if you ask for one.
I like to be called David, but “Mister Hodges” and “Professor” are popular choices. My ESL students’ charming alternative, “Mister David,” is my favorite by far.
Obviously this is not ready for your portfolio, Tokens, and considering the progress you’ve made since your Draft version, you aren’t making much progress toward that finished product.
You’re not obligated to request feedback, but building a Portfolio without it is dangerous. In two weeks, I’ll shut down feedback for this assignment. If you haven’t received any, you won’t get any, and it will be difficult to argue (as you must) that you engaged in and benefited from the “recursive” process of writing and rewriting through the social aspect of writing for a community.
I care about your success, but not more than you do. I won’t pull and I won’t push, but I will give you a boost if you ask for one.
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