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Domia abr Wyrda (Performance)

Modern plumbing ruins the imagery, she sings like a metal shop accident, and the background music is atrociously inappropriate, but the girl is intense. .  

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Reflective – mica

GOAL 1: I used a multi-stage, recursive, and social process for my writing and took into consideration feedback from my instructor, classmates, and other readers. The goal of the first core value is to understand that writing is a practice … Continue reading

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Agenda TUE DEC 02

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My Notes Feedback Policy now through the end of the semester. Your very devoted professor is always delighted to provide feedback to students who use it to make substantial revisions to their essays. However, it is common at semester’s end … Continue reading

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Agenda MON DEC 01

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My Notes Feedback Policy now through the end of the semester. Your very devoted professor is always delighted to provide feedback to students who use it to make substantial revisions to their essays. However, it is common at semester’s end … Continue reading

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Agenda WED NOV 26

My Notes Good Citation Exercise Robust Sentences Exercise Rebuttal Exercise

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Rebuttal Exercise

A Price Too High Is Nuclear Power Worth the Risk? Bob Herbert asks the question in the Opinion pages of the New York Times. It’s pretty clear from the evidence he cites that he thinks the answer is No, it’s … Continue reading

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Robust Sentences Exercise

In feedback, I often remark that students overuse “it,” or “that,” or “there is,” or “there are,” or, worst of all, “that means.” Pressed to explain why you should avoid these simple, seemingly essential constructions, I stammer something about their … Continue reading

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Good Citation Exercise

The following are all good citation techniques. Refer to this list if you’re ever in doubt about how to cite and briefly quote in the same short sentence. Daniel Flath, in his essay, “Boylan’s Folly,” claims that “boys can’t learn … Continue reading

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Agenda MON NOV 24

My Notes Update to Throwdown Model Update to Throwdown Assignment On Bias A10: Self-Reflective Statement

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Agenda TUE NOV 25

My Notes Update to Throwdown Model Update to Throwdown Assignment On Bias A10: Self-Reflective Statement Work Cited Friedersdorf, Conor. “Chris Christie’s Pig Problem.” The Atlantic. Atlantic Media Company, 12 Nov. 2014. Web. 24 Nov. 2014.

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